Blogger #2

Blogger #2

Part 1

1.  The Original Paragraph - 

Bam! The news hit me at the end of another school year as a third grader. I was officially going to move to another state. I was really sad because I had made so many friends and had known so many people at my old school because I attended there since preschool. All of this now started a chain of reactions that were later going to shape my personality and mentality. Just the moving experience made me really sad because I had to say goodbye to so many family members and friends. Moving across the country from California to North Carolina was just making me feel really strange and almost depressed which was unusual for a kid.

2. Simple Sentence Paragraph -

The news hit me at the end of another school year as a third grader. I was officially going to move to another state. I was really sad. I had made so many friends. Had known so many people at my old school. I attended there since preschool. All of this started a chain of reactions. That was later going to shape my personality and mentality. The moving experience made me really sad. I had to say good bye to so many family members and friends. Moving across the country from California to North Carolina was just making me feel really strange. Made me almost depressed which was unusual for a kid.

3. Compound Sentence Paragraph-

Bam, the news hit me at the end of another school year as a third grader; I was officially going to move to another state and I was really sad because I had made so many friends, and had known so many people at my old school because, I had to say goodbye to so many family members, and friends but moving across the country from California to North Carolina was just making me fell really strange; It made me almost depressed which was unusual for a kid.

Part 2

Writing Identities

P. 119

1. The words were basically being expressed saying that does your appearance really matter in life and if certain clothes give you a higher status that everyone else. The idea that was expressed in the image was exactly the same as it was in the words because it shows them wearing certain outfits that are suppose to give them higher power which clearly not always it does.