Blogger 2

Original:

With our group in breach of our contract, we were forced to go our separate ways. I am blessed and happy with my life now and I wouldn’t have it any other way. I express myself and my love for God through music every single Sunday at church happily. I have two beautiful boys that admirably watch me on that alter every Sunday and I wouldn’t take anything back if I could. Thank you Jesus.  

1st

Our group was in breach of our contract. We were forced to go our separate ways. I am blessed and happy with my life now. I wouldn't have it any other way. I express myself. I happily express my love for God every Sunday at church. I have two beautiful boys. They admirably watch me on that alter every Sunday. I wouldn't take anything back if i could. Thank you Jesus.

2nd

With our group in breach of our contract, we were forced to go our separate ways but i am blessed and happy with my life now and i wouldn't have it any other way; I express my love for God through music every single Sunday at church, happily, and i have two beautiful boys that admirably watch me on that alter every Sunday and I wouldn't take anything back if i could, thank you Jesus.


Writing Identities

Issue 3 Pg 119

This scene is definitely visual. I can see each costume they describe and the atmosphere each character is in. The writer does a great job of using detailed examples to get her point across. The words the writer is using and the mood the writing sets perfectly matches the visual image.